Notes from critiques helping to understand how it could work a bit better.
After the crit I realised that the larger works were awkwardly too far apart from each other and distracted to a point where it took away from the work, an attention to material and substance was brought up and how to go around subject matter instead of just making to make or to over lap, how is that done and communicated and what does this do.
The figure: sits awkwardly I tried to create this almost figure that related to the figures in development plans, photoshopped onto of plans where lighting feels all wrong coming from different direction or its super composed on top of a top that feels so fake and have this real unreal connection.
What seemed to be the most successful was the material responds and colour response to place, subject and ideas surrounding the idea of landscape and how I along with others may see and interact with the natural landscape.
Llenyd Price 